P.S. C1S1R1: High-Altitude Launch

(May 12, 2026 R1 Revision notes: Changed from jet-wings to powered hang gliders. Also updated per reviewer comments.)

Sierra Nevada’s, California

Polaris Station concept art

“We are ‘go’ for terminal countdown.” Inside his dark helmet, Kendall Parker saw his own eyes reflecting in the heads-up-display (HUD). “Flight computer, confirm ‘go’ for flight.”

The long shadows over Yosemite promised perfect conditions for a powered hang-glider flight. 

“Checklist complete,” the helmet computer voice confirmed. “All subsystems ready.”

With characteristic theatrical confidence Kendall called out to his flight partner via two-way radio, “Our altitude is ninety-five hundred feet. When we reach ten-thousand, and on my mark, pull your platform release lever, dive straight down for five seconds, ignite engine, then pitch up towards the horizon.” Kendall nodded. “Then… have fun.” As if an afterthought he added. “And… If there’s serious trouble, disconnect harness and activate parachute.” 

Face down, forty-five-year-old Kendall and his young-adult daughter, Becca, rose higher and higher, toe-to-toe, on a platform under a heavy-lift drone. 

“And what about the Rangers?” Becca said. “Their gonna be waiting for us this time.”

Becca had flown many times and knew the drill, but put up with her father’s pride and prerogative to show off and instruct his students. 

“What are they gonna do, fine me?” Kendall replied. “Besides, the park rules don’t specifically prohibit a small engine…”

Below, the sparse granite domes, scenic view parking lots, and ranger stations slowly retreated.

“Dad,” Becca exclaimed over the helmet radio, “can you believe that moonrise?”

Kendall hesitated, then rotated his helmet right. “Stunning.” Then he refocused on his HUD.

“Ninety-six hundred feet.” He looked again at the nearly full moon for more than a moment as though fighting an emotion. Finally, he turned back, lowered his visor and looked west, “Awe! Can you believe that sunset?”

Head-to-toe flight suits enshrouded each aviator, his red, hers yellow. Crowned by white helmets with embedded cameras they would rule the skies and record the flight. Each white-knuckled hand was gloved, right hands gripping there respective motorcycle-style throttle. Each left thumb, pressing lightly on the platform release lever. Like winged serifs departing heaven, each pilot was attached by harness to bright-colored, swept-back five-meter delta-wings. 

“Ninety-eight hundred,” Kendall called out.

Each chest lowered in deep breath, the smell of cedar, pine and campfire now diminished. Each pilot flexed their fingers out and in on the grips, slowly rotating ankles left and right. Programed to track, choreograph and film their flight until touchdown, the drone with its loud quad-copter hum drowned out each accelerating heart beat. The lower horizontal platform hung from the overhead drone by a single round structural column. 

“Ninety-nine hundred.”

Looking down, Kendall could see the sharp, nearly straight summit ridge of Half Dome. The west face was a brilliant golden glow streaked with several whiter bands of granite descending down the mountain. The back side of the dome was gray and shadowed.

“Ready!”

Both pilots checked their harness carabiner, gripped the control bar, rolled their shoulders and heads back and forth, leaned forward on the platform.

“On my mark. Three, two, one, mark.”

Click. Click. Like a trap-door, the platform folded quickly downward, releasing its load from both sides.

Simultaneously Kendall and Becca slid away from each other off the platform. As they left the platform, the drone lunged upward, relieved. Earth pulled them downward like Olympic divers. The upward wind filled their sails. The drone relocated rapidly. Each pilot ignited their respective engine, accelerated, pushed out on their control bars and pitched up in opposite directions toward the horizon. Looking left, Kendall noted the drone in perfect position to video them separating with Half Dome in the background. Their exposed facial skin fluttered against the cool pulsating air waves, flying like eagles, diving and soaring to their heart’s content. Throttling back, they glided toward Half Dome. Kendall led the way with Becca flanking close behind on his right and the drone on his left like three birds in draft formation. Passing familiar peaks and points, they stealthily leveled off at one-thousand feet above the valley floor and headed straight for Yosemite Falls then a close pass of El Capitan.

Adrenaline overcame restraint. 

“Yes!” Without thinking, Kendall let go with one hand and pumped his fist. “That’s how you do it.”

“Perfect!” Becca yelled.

The granite cliffs echoed their concurrence.

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Reader comments requested – I appreciate suggestions on clarity, flow, dialogue, characters and engagement. I especially welcome technical subject matter expert discussion. Challenge assumptions and help improve realism and storytelling.

P.S. C1S1: High-Altitude Launch

Sierra Nevada’s, California

Concept art for Polaris Station

“We are ‘go’ for terminal countdown.” Inside his dark helmet, forty-five-year-old Kendall Parker saw his own eyes reflecting in the heads-up-display (HUD). “Flight computer, confirm ‘go’ for flight.”

The long shadows over Yosemite promised perfect conditions for a jet-wing flight. 

“Checklist complete,” the female computer voice confirmed. “All subsystems ready.”

With characteristic theatrical confidence Kendall called out to his flight partner, “Our altitude is ninety-five hundred feet. When we reach ten-thousand, and on my mark, pull your docking release lever, back-dive straight down for five seconds, ignite engines, roll one-eighty, then pitch up towards the horizon.” Kendall nodded. “Then… have fun.” As if an afterthought he added. “And… If there’s serious trouble, eject your wings and activate parachute.” 

Kendall Parker and his young-adult daughter, Becca, rose higher and higher, facing each other, standing on the foot rails of a heavy-lift drone. 

“And what about the Rangers?” Becca said. “They almost tracked you last time.” Becca had flown many times and knew the drill, but put up with her father’s pride and prerogative to show off and instruct his students. 

“What are they gonna do, give me a fine?” Kendall replied. 

Below, the sparse granite domes, scenic view parking lots, and ranger stations slowly retreated.

“Dad,” Becca exclaimed over the helmet radio, “can you believe that moonrise?”

Kendall rotated his helmet right. “Stunning.” Then he refocused on his HUD.

“Ninety-six hundred feet.” He looked back at the nearly full moon for more than a moment as though fighting an emotion. Finally, he turned back, lowered his visor and looked west, “Awe! Can you believe that sunset?”

Head-to-toe flight suits enshrouded each aviator, his red, hers yellow. Crowned by white helmets with embedded cameras they would rule the skies and record the flight. Each white-knuckled hand was gloved, right hands gripping there respective motorcycle-style throttle. Each left thumb, pressing lightly on the release lever. Like winged serifs departing heaven, each pilot was bound by harness to light-blue, three-meter V-wings. 

“Ninety-eight hundred,” Kendall called out.

Each chest raised in deep breath, the smell of cedar, pine and campfire now diminished. Each pilot flexed their fingers out and in on the grips, slowly rotating heals left and right, pressing against the foot platform. The loud vibration of the quad-copter propellers drowned out each accelerating heart beat. The lower drone structure resembled the basket of a hot air-balloon with equipped with a fully gimbaled camera on the bottom. Software ready to command the drone to track, choreograph and film their flight until touchdown.

“Ninety-nine hundred.”

Leaning back slightly and looking down over his shoulder, Kendall could see the sharp nearly straight summit ridge of Half Dome. The north-west face was a brilliant golden glow streaked with several whiter bands of granite descending down the mountain. The back side of the dome was gray and shadowed.

“Ready!”

Both pilots again planted the balls of their feet across the lower railing, rolling their shoulders and heads back and forth, leaning away from the drone.

“On my mark. Three, two, one, mark.”

Click. Click. 

Simultaneously Kendall and Becca fell away. As their feet left the rails, the drone lunged upward, relieved. Earth pulled them downward like Olympic divers doing coordinated back dives from opposite sides of the platform. Twisting at the waist, V-wings followed their shape and they body-rolled until face to face, upside down about twenty meters apart. The drone relocated rapidly. Each pilot ignited their engines, accelerated, arched their backs, then pitched up in opposite directions toward the horizon. Looking left, Kendall noted the drone in perfect position to video them separating at high speed. Their exposed facial skin fluttered against the pulsating air waves, flying like eagles, diving and soaring to their hearts content. Throttling back, they glided toward Half Dome. Kendall led the way with Becca flanking close behind on his right and the drone on his left like three birds in draft formation. Passing familiar peaks and points, they stealthily leveled off at one-thousand feet above the valley floor and headed straight for Yosemite Falls then a close pass of El Capitan.

Adrenaline overcame restraint. 

“Wahoo!” Kendall exclaimed.

“Yahoo!” Becca followed.

The granite cliffs replied. 

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Reader comments requested – I appreciate suggestions on clarity, flow, dialogue, characters and engagement. I especially welcome technical subject matter expert discussion. Challenge assumptions and help improve realism and storytelling.